There was noise coming from downstairs and I think I know why. We have no money, she says, we have no food, she says while father, oh poor father, he is trying to soothe her little ill-natured ignorant soul. I still can’t understand why father married her; she lacks the empathy and kindness mum used to have. Plus she once tried to kill me but I said nothing to father. I heard her planning on this one day when I came home from school earlier. ‘Oh, my ginger house will be enough to get her sick’. I refused to eat gingerbread of any sort from that point on.
Lili was combing her long wavy copper red hair in front of the mirror that used to be her mother’s. She wasn’t really looking at herself in the mirror, but contemplating on something that was beyond her. Her pink oleander had finally bloomed. There was a flower on its small tree and three other buds ready to bloom. It was next to a mold-infested wall. She tried to hide it by putting the tree there. On her bed, she had one canvas with seven brushes that messed up the sheets. She won’t like this, Lili thought. Well, she herself didn’t like what she painted: some kind of ridiculous old cottage surrounded by bluebells and sunflowers (their house). She had a table with three books she managed to save from her stepmother’s rage (she took her mother’s books and burned them during the winter). It was a botanical art history book, The Letters of Van Gogh, and a book with French verb conjugations. Next to the books, she had a watercolor-painted small jar with one withered poppy in it. It was soothing to look at when trying to learn the conjugation of some French verb.
Some melodic death metal song was playing on the background while she was packing the books, some clothing items and left some room in her backpack for viands she was going to take in the morning. She had a tape with this kind of music from a crone-lady she met in a thrift shop and so, Lili has played it ever since on her cassette deck. I’m leaving tomorrow. Oh, poor father, it must be so hard for him to feed us when they don’t even give him the wages on time. I’m too much of a burden for him…Well, I’m old enough though, I have to find myself something to work, maybe teach French, maybe paint, maybe draw or write poetry, or maybe something else I’m not good at, but I have to make my money. The next day, she woke up and prepared for her journey. She put on some old ragged skinny jeans, a pair of black narrow calf boots the soles of which were too thin not to get soaked in water if there was rain, and a scarlet top. She combed her hair and made a Celtic braid, took some food and off she went.
Now, she heard people talking about this village nearby where life was believed to be easier. Its name was Heav-Ene-Den. To get to this village she had to pass through the North Forest. She was not afraid; she took her father’s dagger, had some poisonous plant extracts in liquid form (that is, if she was attacked, she could just throw something on that person’s skin to cause burns or rashes) and carried her viper-poison ointment in case she got hurt. In the North Forest where the sun never beams, one’s mind can easily fall into misery. Many cases of dead people were reported here because, they say, it is haunted and it makes you hallucinate. It seems a little gloomy, but it’s just a forest with small paths. You can’t see the sky because the tree crowns protect it and cover its small flaws whereas wild flowers and shrubbery surround you. Oh, poor father, left with such a nauseous creature around…This forest smells so odd; this is not the fragrance of raw soil, clay, leaves and freshly-ripen-and-gathered wild berries, but it smells more like mildew and poisonous mushrooms that have just been found because I can see their stems left in the ground next to this old oak; people take only their caps for some reason.
Lili followed several paths and got nowhere. She couldn’t see the sun, but judging by the way light changed its nuance, it was probably dusk already. She counted the paths taken; this was the twelfth. Why, this path has something about it, the trees are fewer, the climate in this area is damp and the ground seems to be sand. And this palm tree is marvelous! She continued her journey without wondering at things, and wandered further on the bizarre route. Solitude is judged too harshly. Alas, it makes people cruel and they end up despising other creatures but it is part of us, it is part of experience, oh father, will inner solitude help you keep your mental health with thy harpy beside you or will it drive you mad? Why, I don’t think it will be my case because my solitude is sacred. She thought she managed to escape the cold fata morgana of the North she saw earlier when she realized there was no trail left to follow. Now Lili was a little worried, thinking whether she could remember her way back to the main path. In her silent frenzy, she noticed something behind the cracked dried trunks of trees. She went off the footpath and was bewildered of what she found.
It doesn’t really look like a manor house but it is for sure a wide mansion. It looked like a destroyed Victorian-style house, but it must have been older. The bricks looked as if they were spluttered with tar (It reminds me of charcoal) whereas the left side of the house was completely protected by the complexity of some shy ivy. Its wooden bargeboards hosted a broken window that still had its curtains on. The curtain moved, that’s how Lili actually noticed it. It had common wooden windows, three-sided bay windows with some mosaic design on them at the upper floor and a six-paneled sliding window at the ground floor. It had a porch with the floor made out of stone. When she climbed up the porch, she noticed the white lake surrounded by reeds, with water lilies on it. She entered the half-opened door to find no one inside. Such a wonderful place abandoned and left for tramps. This must have been such a nice house a few centuries ago! What Lili noticed about this house when she entered, beside the maintained furniture within it, was the number of doors inside the house. So many rooms for no one to live in! The doors had the same aspect: brown wooden doors with a rusty door latch. Some were closed, some were open. The ones that opened usually had rubbish in them. When she found the kitchen, she even found some rotten tomatoes in the pantry and a bouquet of white roses thrown down on the floor. It appeared that they had been bought a few days ago. So there is someone living here! Lili went up the stone spiral stairs only to get to a long hall that would sure echo her steps if she wasn’t careful. She only found more doors. She started counting the rooms from left to right when she noticed that the thirteenth door on the left side had a different design than the rest. This door really draws one’s attention to it. Not because it’s different but because it is baroque-like. It is not a plain door made out of wood, but it is made of massive beech with details around it, exquisite details of some fallen angels and unlike the other doors from the upper floor, this is open.
Lili entered a library. She could see a table with candles on it, some foxgloves in a clay pot and a messed up desk. So many papers and books just left here without any intention of arranging them! Lili was hypnotized by the number of bookshelves there. She was just firmly caressing the covers of books from a shelf when she saw a shadow going into an annex that was within the chamber. A room without a door! When she entered, she noticed some panels put on the walls but it was too dark for her to see what it was there. I should take the candles from the table…I think there were also some matches next to the clay pot. And she took the candles and walked again into the annex, just to see I‑don’t‑know-how-many locks of different shades of red hair: auburn, cinnamon, copper, crimson, strawberry-blonde, ginger, classic red, red mahogany, cherry brown, golden rose, burgundy, black cherry, red velvet, ruby red, red black, aubergine red, red violet, and magenta. They were all put in glass cases, and they also had name tags. Well, perhaps I shouldn’t be here.
‘You really shouldn’t be here.’ A lady’s voice was heard coming from a dark corner.
‘Let me see your face…’ Lili uttered.
In the light of the candle she awaited for a figure to appear. It was a bald lady wearing a dark blue silk gown with a white lace collar and virago sleeves. There were golden patterns embroidered on her dress and small gems which looked a little like kitsch for Lili, but this exotic lady was surely not a member of this society. She had her makeup messed up with tears in her eyes even now and mascara on her cheeks. Her lips were purple instead of the natural or artificial red of women’s beauty, and she kept repeating the same words: you really shouldn’t be here; you really shouldn’t be here…
‘Can you tell me what happened to you?’
‘You really shouldn’t be here…you really shouldn’t be here…’
‘Tell me what happened to you.’
‘He knows. He comes.’
‘Go on.’
‘I died in 1657. He was born around 1400.’
‘And…?’
‘My name. Dost thou see?’
I looked where she put her finger and I saw a dark auburn lock of hair under which it was written Madame Dominique Mathilde Le Roux 1657.
‘Are the other women here too?’
‘You really shouldn’t be here. He knows. He comes.’
Simultaneously with her last words, the hall echoed footsteps – slowly-moving 15-century glass footwear. The lady just broke down into a convulsion of unarticulated words: ‘He really no you shouldn’t you shouldn’t be here you really shouldn’t be here, he, he, he knows, comes he knows you really shouldn’t be here’. I’ll hide and find my way out of the room. I just can’t follow Mathilde. I think she has just collapsed…so many years dead but living here with this brute… and the other ones too. Oh, father, where are you? Oh, I’ll find my way out…I almost forgot to blow the candle.
Lili hid under the table while holding her dagger tight in her moderately shaking hands and had her plant extracts prepared just in case. He opened the door and arrogantly said: ‘I know. I came and you really shouldn’t be here, Lili!’
Lili came out from under the table and looked him straight in the eyes. There were more candles in the chamber than she thought there were and as he entered, she now could see the minute details of wallpapers and more than that, she could see his eccentric and refined lack of taste in garments. He wore a bright red velvet waistcoat over a Byzantium purple damask shirt, with Russian green velvet trousers and overall, he had an ochre coat adorned with silver fox fur on the collar and on the cuffs. He had rubies instead of buttons and wore three massive golden rings on each hand. He had a French fork beard with a shade of blue in it, yellow eyes and he was bald, just like the lady Lili met before.
‘Copper red. My favourite.’
‘I’m glad you like it, sir.’
‘Would you like to stay here, Lili?’
‘No, sir. I deviated from the route I should have taken anyway.’
‘What a pity, indeed…’
Now, he was already preparing to take hold on his diamond cutlass but luckily, Lili noticed and threw on his face one of her liquid plant extracts. His scream was that of a tormented beast as her plant liquor was burning his face. Unfortunately, he managed to stab her in the right arm, but Lili had her dagger prepared, stabbed him in the eye and ran away. She ran through the hall, down the stone stairs, through the hall again and out the door, but thorns had enclosed the mansion. I must heal my wound…the viper ointment, yes, that will do. She treated her wound quickly, took the dagger and made her way through the thorns. The pain of the stings was unbearable, but her ambition was stronger. When she got out of the thorns, she was full of deep scars and she felt dizzy. I have to walk…I have to go back on my way…Oh father, my head hurts, my chest hurts…I have to go to the village to make money.
Trying to find her way back to the footpath, she remarked that the white lake had extended. She had to swim over to the other shore, so Lili got in it, tried to swim but she couldn’t keep her head over the water. She screamed in despair and pain, but something was dragging her down to the bottom. She was beneath the surface now. I have to get up…Why does my chest hurt? I have to work…money for father; He comes he knows I’m here I’m here…I have to swim. No, I can’t drown! Oh father oh please!
‘Lili, it’s OK! You were dreaming.’
Lili felt her eyes sore and couldn’t really recognize the figure in front of her. Who are you? My head, my chest…Water please water…No.
‘Darling, please bring some water for Lili. It’s OK, you are just ill, but you’ll be fine, you’ll be fine.’ Her father said that and kissed her on the forehead. He was terribly worried for the girl. The doctor told them the diagnosis: TB meningitis. He tried to soothe her and offer her comfort, but she had so little chances to live. After giving her some water, she fell asleep again. Her father looked desperate. He hasn’t slept or eaten for a few days in a row. He promised himself he would watch some more over his little girl (she was only sixteen and already sick with this terrible disease!). He thought that he should also try some of the gingerbread made by his dear wife and left on Lili’s drawer for her to be nourished.
A Note on the Text
This is an attempt of postmodern rewriting. It maintains some of the characteristics of a fairy tale. It preserves elements specific to a fairy tale (number three, number thirteen, number twelve) and there is no time for wonderment in the tale. Judging after reading it, one might say that there are storylines taken from some traditional fairy tales, meaning that, this tale uses intertextuality (integration of more texts within one text). Hansel and Gretel is one of these fairy tales, but it is kind of a reversal: in Grimm’s version of the tale, the children are left in the woods whereas here, it is Lili who decides to go and work, so her father will not have too many mouths to feed. At the same time, the presence of gingerbread also reminds the reader of this fairy tale. The Juniper Tree is present as the stepmother tries to kill her stepdaughter. Elements associated to Sleeping Beauty are the thorns which also appear in this postmodern fairy tale. Nevertheless, the predominant storyline this tale follows remains Bluebeard. More than that, there are a number of anachronisms appearing in the text: the thrift shop, melodic death metal, or the tape.
To have a better vision of Lili’s image, please check Dante Gabriel Rossetti’s Lady Lilith.
Selena Acqui
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